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Comment on ‘Ghost-like’ white….comment by Elaine

Elaine — Wed, 27 Feb 2008 07:12:45 +0000

Place the reason why you want to share this piece of news, and them post the article behind it. Elaine

Delete “The white spot stag . that’s very special !!”
Change “Because of it’s special” to “Because of its being special”
“more of poachers are catching then for the money .” should be “more poachers are trying to catch them”

Comment on Self Introduce by K‧Daniel

K‧Daniel — Fri, 01 Feb 2008 03:07:24 +0000

Well, I am Daniel. I know you and your family a lot. You have a doctor father, a psychologist mother, a well brother and a cute sister.

Do you want to be a doctor like your father? It is not easy to be a doctor.I wish you could make your dream come ture!

Comment on Self Introduce by leoo88556

leoo88556 — Thu, 31 Jan 2008 02:18:16 +0000

hi … it’s me … i don’t know what to say … i learn a lot of you from your self introduction … it’s my honor to be your classmate … my friend … …

Comment on Self Introduce by elaine168

elaine168 — Mon, 28 Jan 2008 05:46:14 +0000

Good job, William! Now I know that your father has a great influence on you: you want to follow his footstep and become a doctor too, right? Work hard and your dream is sure to become a reality!

Note that there are some misspellings: “Physics”, “Pudding” , “I” (Capitalize “P” and “I”), “bad”, add “a” before “doctor” and “s” after “shout” and “work”. Add a full stop (句點) in the end.
Keep up the hard work!

Elaine