The white spot stags are endangered .The white spot stag . that’s very special !! Because of it’s special , more of poachers are catching then for the money . So we should protect them.
The white spot stags are endangered .The white spot stag . that’s very special !! Because of it’s special , more of poachers are catching then for the money . So we should protect them.
Elaine said,
February 27, 2008 @ 7:12 am
Place the reason why you want to share this piece of news, and them post the article behind it. Elaine
Delete “The white spot stag . that’s very special !!”
Change “Because of it’s special” to “Because of its being special”
“more of poachers are catching then for the money .” should be “more poachers are trying to catch them”