Hollow,my name is William. I was born on July 17,1991.
There are 5 people in my family, including
my father, my mother, my sister, my brother and me.
My favorite subject is Physic .
My favorite song is “In The End”.
Pudding is my favorite food. Discovery is my favorite TV program.
I like to watch TV and play basketball in free time.
In the future, I want to be an doctor. So i need to study hard.My father is a doctor. He is smart. But his temper is bad. He always shouts at me.
My mother is a psychologist. She work very hard at research
elaine168 said,
January 28, 2008 @ 5:46 am
Good job, William! Now I know that your father has a great influence on you: you want to follow his footstep and become a doctor too, right? Work hard and your dream is sure to become a reality!
Note that there are some misspellings: “Physics”, “Pudding” , “I” (Capitalize “P” and “I”), “bad”, add “a” before “doctor” and “s” after “shout” and “work”. Add a full stop (句點) in the end.
Keep up the hard work!
Elaine
leoo88556 said,
January 31, 2008 @ 2:18 am
hi … it’s me … i don’t know what to say … i learn a lot of you from your self introduction … it’s my honor to be your classmate … my friend … …
K‧Daniel said,
February 1, 2008 @ 3:07 am
Well, I am Daniel. I know you and your family a lot. You have a doctor father, a psychologist mother, a well brother and a cute sister.
Do you want to be a doctor like your father? It is not easy to be a doctor.I wish you could make your dream come ture!